In general i liked the idea and the length of the video, but I think it is a little light on content. I’d keep experimenting and maybe show the army in different fighting formations for different tactical terrain and different opponents.
Nice video Wolfskin. A good little army you got there. I like the painting and the style of the video. The turntable is great and I can see how you voice over the video with selected information from the book. Also the way you put the Essex pack numbers on screen let’s the viewer see how you put the Army together. Altogether a really good showcase video - thanks.
The only suggestions I would make is to describe your sources for how the army was painted (i.e. your chariot horses have tiger skins - where did that idea come from? Was it a guess?) and how historically accurate you think the painting is. Also a comment on how the army will fight and how well the units will combine on the table.